Jun 7, 2007

Haiku.008

A bird sings at dawn,
The echoes answer its song.
A bird flies* alone...

1 comment:

  1. *I changed "Sings" to flies. There were many sings and song in the haiku.

    I wanted to express a feeling of loneliness, in which the bird thinks he's not alone because of the echoes and never manages to find another bird.

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